Hm.
Well, I always enjoy stick fights, and I recognize the fact that it's an attempt to make something original out of a genre that's had virtually everything done in it already. The only problem is that it doesn't work. It felt like a very slow fight, not to mention that I never got the impression that they were dancing except for one or two very short moments, and they felt forced. The animation, as I think has been pointed out by a few others, is choppy at best. It's a shame, because it's a very novel idea. I think what really ruined the whole thing was fluidity; that's what you need to work on more than anything, judging by this animation.
On the nice sides, though, you do have some sweet, jazzy music in this, and it was nice to have such different colors between the sticks, so that I never got mixed up between who was who.