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GuitarKirby

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Mostly just okay. I think that even if this had been released when it was topical, I still would have found it a bit lacking. The timing of the jokes felt a bit off.

Also, while the animation was clean, it was also a bit stiff and robotic. Might want to work on fluidity of motion for whatever you do next.

Aside from that, I thought it was pretty good.

Sorry to be the voice of brutal reason, but I need to slam you a bit.
Your animation was somewhat sub-par.
The lack of a preloader is offensive, as it makes the animation loop forever.
The sound is terrible quality, especially the voice, which seems like you made it shorter and faster to save space.

Sorry, but a nice idea doesn't make a good animation.

Kickass as always... Also, I caught that bit from Goemon's Great Adventure. Totally awesome.

Impressive.

I was never a DBZ guy, but I WAS a Toonami guy (may it rest in peace). I'm actually impressed; although I rarely watched it, I remember the openings to DBZ episodes, and this was spot on. Nicely done. However, some of the characters lack proper drawing.

Awesome.

This is great; the story really kicks off here, and everything looks pretty good.
I think you need to get someone else doing officer Jenny. She sounds bored on every line. Confusing, since she sounds fine as Bianca, but Jenny's voice just sucks. Despite that, though, this was REALLY enjoyable. I like the interactive battles, as well; it adds an element of fun that keeps the watcher/player involved.

Sweet.

If it hits Cartoon Network, I'll watch it.

Things that need work.

Well, of the top of my head, it looks really nice, the animation is surprisingly smooth, and the audio is crystal clear. I was impressed that you melded eastern and western animation so easily. However, there were two problems I noticed, upon further inspection.
Firstly, the shading is a little extreme; the colors contrast too much. Try to get some shades that are a little closer together. Secondly, the outlines look kind of clumsy. They aren't smooth; it feels like they're flying around everywhere. A small detail, but it is noticeable.

Sweet.

Well played, sir. Well played indeed.

I'm eating out tonight.

James Hansen @GuitarKirby

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